I liked the description, you could really see what was there. The end was a good twist, kind of like the bitter toothache that comes with too much sweet candy.

I adore the imagery. You emit such a fantastic feel for the girl with your word choice. In particular, I loved the line "Covered from chest to middle thigh/In a bandage dress" - though I couldn't tell you why.

Wow...
Amazing poem.

This is gorgeous, beautiful. I love this vision of beauty. You chose the words so perfectly. The imagery is magnificient. This is definitely one of my favourite poems in a long while.

Ah, a very interesting poem. I'm not quite sure what to make of it. Some of the lines seem almost sexual -- some expressing dire pain -- some expressing serenity. I think that if this poem was created to stir up a person's emotions, it did the trick.
Just a note: This poem lacks a flow. I tried to break it down iambically, rhythmically... It obviously has little rhyme... Very nice, but it isn't as powerful becasue it just doesn't flow. Work on that, and keep writing.

Excellent, excellent description. I applaud you for this poem.
~WhiteRequiem