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| amazingblazes 2004-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow...for having such a long title, this was incredibly good. ((sorry, an attempt at humour there)) Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story so far. Your description of the dream was dead-on, and this way of introducing your character was neat and effective. As well as slightly disturbing - to have the same dream for 366 days in a row? Scary. Anyway, I really liked this chapter, and you're going on my author alerts. Just thought you might like to know! |