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| metropolis noir 2004-08-07 ch 1, | Pretty good intro. I look forward to the rest of it! |
| Madison L 2004-07-27 ch 4, | UPDATE WOMAN! Don't make me shake my fist at you... Good cliffhanger... |
| Scorpio 2004-07-15 ch 3, | OMG! Love at first sight, or what is this!!?? God! I think something has really gotten into his brain! lol! Ellie doesn't seem bad. Ah anyways, lets see how he makes his move towards the Russian girl. (She's Russian, right??) This is a bad cliffhanger you know. You better do something about it! UPDATE girl, UPDATE! |
| Scorpio 2004-07-15 ch 2, | Aw. That is so cute!! lol! Young love, hehe. It really is cute! Please continue!! |
| Madison L 2004-07-07 ch 2, | Ahh.. young love. It's funny, I see little things in your story that remind me of mine. It's very good, and I will keep reading and reviewing, because I just do that. And yes, dahling, you did review my story. Thanks. |
| Madison L 2004-06-27 ch 1, | Marvelous, marvelous. You're a very talented writer. Hopefully, you'd be inclined to review my story, which would make me a very happy girl. |