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| Brightstarr-Bella 2005-05-02 ch 5, | Always return to the scene of the crime. Or, in this case, the scene of the miracle. I liked this short story :) *Bella* ~Kia Kha~ |
| Brightstarr-Bella 2005-05-02 ch 3, | glad he made his decision. I automatically don't like Devan- typical bully. :s Good portraying of character. *bella* ~Kia Kha~ |
| Brightstarr-Bella 2005-05-02 ch 2, | Another good chapter :) Some of the formatting is off, but your writing flows really well. Keep it up, *Bella* |
| Brightstarr-Bella 2005-05-02 ch 1, | Poor Michael. :( A friend of mine Kalyra Shadowdancer told me you also existed in the fictionpress world so I decided to check out your writing. Nice chapter, *Bella* ~Kia Kha~ |
| Marisa Rae 2004-07-23 ch 1, | Oh my goodness! As soon as I started reading I was completely enthralled! I think you did a wonderful job! |
| HazelwithEnvy 2004-06-29 ch 5, | Wow! Cool! It's awesome that Jason made his descision! And now he's going back to the orphanage? Cool! |
| HazelwithEnvy 2004-06-27 ch 2, | Yay! Michael/Jason, has someone to love him! It's really good so far, and I can't wait to see what will come up next! :) |
| HazelwithEnvy 2004-06-27 ch 1, | I really like it so far! It's short, but thats okay! I can't wait to see what Chapter 2 is like. :) |