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Reviews For: Hope For An Orphan

Brightstarr-Bella
2005-05-02
ch 5,
Always return to the scene of the crime. Or, in this case, the scene of the miracle. I liked this short story :)

*Bella*

~Kia Kha~
Brightstarr-Bella
2005-05-02
ch 3,
glad he made his decision. I automatically don't like Devan- typical bully. :s Good portraying of character.

*bella*

~Kia Kha~
Brightstarr-Bella
2005-05-02
ch 2,
Another good chapter :) Some of the formatting is off, but your writing flows really well. Keep it up,

*Bella*
Brightstarr-Bella
2005-05-02
ch 1,
Poor Michael. :( A friend of mine Kalyra Shadowdancer told me you also existed in the fictionpress world so I decided to check out your writing. Nice chapter,

*Bella*

~Kia Kha~
Marisa Rae
2004-07-23
ch 1,
Oh my goodness! As soon as I started reading I was completely enthralled! I think you did a wonderful job!
HazelwithEnvy
2004-06-29
ch 5,
Wow! Cool! It's awesome that Jason made his descision! And now he's going back to the orphanage? Cool!
HazelwithEnvy
2004-06-27
ch 2,
Yay! Michael/Jason, has someone to love him! It's really good so far, and I can't wait to see what will come up next! :)
HazelwithEnvy
2004-06-27
ch 1,
I really like it so far! It's short, but thats okay! I can't wait to see what Chapter 2 is like. :)
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