Yay for poems! Ya for poems without rhyme! Yay for poems by you! (you're alive) Doop dee doop..on the whole, I like it (no horrible reaction to teen agst or just..teen writing *shiver*) I don't know if I could tell what it was about if you hadn't said so in your intro thingy doodle summary. (vocab on the fritz) But that's not necessairly bad, as you well know.
Some *really* nice and creative imagery that was uber cool and original.
I thin kthe first acknowledgement sounds kinda funny..but that's just me. maybe just knowledge? *shrug* And maybe present perfect... something "has" actually happened?
But that's just little old me! :-p Again, YAY!