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| Simply-Crazy 2008-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseCompletely uncharacteristic lines for a 13 year-old. Other than that, cute story! |
| SapphireIce68 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseNot to be cliched here, but, that was really cute. I like the mysterious ending and playboy gone goodboy. :) |
| Birds and Boats 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseyou seriously have to wright more, because that is one hell of a good story soo yeah...go do that |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAww... How cute! I really like it. If you ask me, you should continue with it... but that's just me... |
| Fellafunk 2004-12-04 ch 1, | abuseYou just smashed your friend in his/her face. This was good, and I think you should write more from a guys view... And it also was a really great story! *hug* |
| pooky wingz 2004-12-04 ch 1, | abuseplz more chapps!! its a cool story from a guys point of view! u shud definately either carry this on or rite another 1 from a guys pov. plz! |
| Coco 2004-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei think that you should keep going with this story. i usually don't get to read a half deasent story with a guy as the mian person!!so congrats on a great first chapter and i really do think you should keep going!!;)!!Later! |
| NomadicWriter 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abusethis short story was cute and i think that you did well for a guy's pov -Kate |
| jegan 2004-10-05 ch 1, | abusevery cute short, sweet and well-written none of the grammar or spelling errors that were present in your story Housing. Well Done. *smiles* |
| hurricane1 2004-10-04 ch 1, | abuseyay! i like this story...but is it gonna b taken in a guy's pov for the whole story? or r u gonna change it from kodii to ajay...hey..btw...ajay is also an indian name...lol...well..please update! thx.. -hurricane |
| Little Mermaid 2004-07-07 ch 1, | abuseeither he's a prettyy open book, or she just knows her brother that well...either way it's ADORABLE... update asap |
| shes toxic 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuse**pout** why only one chapter ? I like it . . . I wanna see it go somewhere! it's good . . . anyway . . . yeah I'll shut up now! |
| Sesdimona 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was a cute story! Most one shots go into detail after detail and are like a billion words, but you kept it under control. Good job! |
| Tamz H-C 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abuseYAY! i love how you started it off! great work |
| darkness falls 2004-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was really good, even though its only a one shot you still managed to create a comlete idea from it without going into lengthy, boring details |