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Simply-Crazy
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuseCompletely uncharacteristic lines for a 13 year-old. Other than that, cute story!
SapphireIce68
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abuseNot to be cliched here, but, that was really cute. I like the mysterious ending and playboy gone goodboy. :)
Birds and Boats
2005-04-11
ch 1,
abuseyou seriously have to wright more, because that is one hell of a good story soo yeah...go do that
DragonFaeLynn
2005-01-22
ch 1,
abuseAww... How cute! I really like it. If you ask me, you should continue with it... but that's just me...
Fellafunk
2004-12-04
ch 1,
abuseYou just smashed your friend in his/her face. This was good, and I think you should write more from a guys view... And it also was a really great story! *hug*
pooky wingz
2004-12-04
ch 1,
abuseplz more chapps!! its a cool story from a guys point of view! u shud definately either carry this on or rite another 1 from a guys pov. plz!
Coco
2004-11-09
ch 1, anon.
abusei think that you should keep going with this story. i usually don't get to read a half deasent story with a guy as the mian person!!so congrats on a great first chapter and i really do think you should keep going!!;)!!Later!
NomadicWriter
2004-10-08
ch 1,
abusethis short story was cute and i think that you did well for a guy's pov
-Kate
jegan
2004-10-05
ch 1,
abusevery cute
short, sweet and well-written
none of the grammar or spelling errors that were present in your story Housing.
Well Done.
*smiles*
hurricane1
2004-10-04
ch 1,
abuseyay! i like this story...but is it gonna b taken in a guy's pov for the whole story? or r u gonna change it from kodii to ajay...hey..btw...ajay is also an indian name...lol...well..please update! thx..
-hurricane
Little Mermaid
2004-07-07
ch 1,
abuseeither he's a prettyy open book, or she just knows her brother that well...either way it's ADORABLE...
update asap
shes toxic
2004-07-03
ch 1,
abuse**pout** why only one chapter ? I like it . . . I wanna see it go somewhere! it's good . . . anyway . . . yeah I'll shut up now!
Sesdimona
2004-06-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was a cute story! Most one shots go into detail after detail and are like a billion words, but you kept it under control. Good job!
Tamz H-C
2004-06-27
ch 1,
abuseYAY! i love how you started it off! great work
darkness falls
2004-06-27
ch 1, anon.
abusethis was really good, even though its only a one shot you still managed to create a comlete idea from it without going into lengthy, boring details
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