i like it very much:)...so cute

aw! :D

haha

this could be a story. and not just a oneshot. :P

ehehehe,. thanks for the story! :)

Completely uncharacteristic lines for a 13 year-old. Other than that, cute story!

Not to be cliched here, but, that was really cute. I like the mysterious ending and playboy gone goodboy. :)

you seriously have to wright more, because that is one hell of a good story soo yeah...go do that

Aww... How cute! I really like it. If you ask me, you should continue with it... but that's just me...

You just smashed your friend in his/her face. This was good, and I think you should write more from a guys view... And it also was a really great story! *hug*

plz more chapps! its a cool story from a guys point of view! u shud definately either carry this on or rite another 1 from a guys pov. plz!

i think that you should keep going with this story. i usually don't get to read a half deasent story with a guy as the mian person!so congrats on a great first chapter and i really do think you should keep going!;)!Later!

this short story was cute and i think that you did well for a guy's pov
-Kate

very cute
short, sweet and well-written
none of the grammar or spelling errors that were present in your story Housing.
Well Done.
*smiles*

yay! i like this story...but is it gonna b taken in a guy's pov for the whole story? or r u gonna change it from kodii to ajay...hey..btw...ajay is also an indian name...lol...well..please update! thx..
-hurricane

either he's a prettyy open book, or she just knows her brother that well...either way it's ADORABLE...
update asap

**pout** why only one chapter ? I like it . . . I wanna see it go somewhere! it's good . . . anyway . . . yeah I'll shut up now!

That was a cute story! Most one shots go into detail after detail and are like a billion words, but you kept it under control. Good job!