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| Leaving Here 2006-07-01 ch 1,  | abusewitching hour? kool! lol I like it! creative!~Liz |
| hateandkill-D 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseCool! I really like this! Nicely done! |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abusegreat poem, i love the line 'lifting the sky blue crayon from it's conformist box' awesome job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |
| cornered.sensations 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI loved this, the imagery was stunning, great work and keep writing! |
| lordelfy 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abusethis is very interesting,awesome writing |
| Princess-anna57 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, good poem. However, the repetition put me off. Nice work though. Also, in response to your review to my poem, I write the way I like. The poems that I post are my everything, and I write the way I want to express my emotions. Thank you for the review though. Keep writing. ~Anna~ |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. ::adds to fav stories:: ~ Noelle ~ |
| g-e-kutie 2004-12-11 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting picture you paint here...but still, your descriptions kick **! Lovely job once more.-J.Me |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this. The sky-blue crayon that turns gray holds it together nicely. |
| Fallen Too Far 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseYou use words to create amazing pictures, and put across a strong message. |
| lady-void 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI like this, it paints a really vivid sort of picture, yet is blank in a way... a good way. I don't know what I mean... |
| Justine 2004-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe way you used words is wounderful. The description is awsome. |