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| SBLAngel 2006-10-06 ch 5, | brill! uh, cnt write much, but it was good! read more tomoz! |
| SBLAngel 2006-10-04 ch 2, | woop! brill first two chappies, will read rest 2moz lol |
| betalight 2006-07-28 ch 6, | I like the little hermit woman. A bit blunt, but good for suspense! |
| Pandemonium Express 2006-02-10 ch 26, | ACK! I'm SO FREAKING confuzed! >_< ...but also hooked. Haha, this story is so out there, so complicated with all the characters and different parts of the world and life, and I love it! I can't wait to see how all of this fits together in the end. It's one of those stories where every time something's revealed, I get sort of an "AHA!" moment (i guess i should say epiphany, but i don't like that word. It bugs me for no reason in particular). Please update! -^_^- |
| anonymous 2006-01-08 ch 1, | "There should not be found in you anyone who...binds others with a spell or anyone who consults a spirit medium or a professional foreteller of events or anyone who inquires of the dead. For everybody doing these things is something detestable to Jehovah, and on account of these detestable things your God is driving them away from before you." Duet. 18:10-12 - I am not trying to be mean or objecting to your right to do, read, and write whatever you want. However I would appreciate it if you would please consider what you are saying when you tell ones you are a Jehovah's Witness. It reflects on all of us. Thank-you. |
| lspeakl 2005-09-29 ch 26, | erhds. okay. im also starting a story.. please review it for me kays? i think sedona is really getting rather psychpathic. lol. k i just hope she and rhys can find a happy ending.. :) |
| speak 2005-09-22 ch 25, | i can see your **. hope this revvs me up for tomorrows english exam. hahas. oh wells. this ** rocks. i dont know if i can get a good spawn of ideas tomorrow. wish me all the best. and dont get **. you'll end up like Thor. or you'll get wrinkles. (even though they both have no link) nights. how come sedonas everywhere? is lucifer messing with her mind? >.< i wish rhys would give me a good night hug. but thats un-rhys. so never mind. just hope i didnt get bitten by a dengue (ades) mosqquito. theyre many of them around these days. *sighs* for the final time, nights. |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 24, | do you tend to leave a small bit of yourself in your characters? |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 23, | AHA THIS CHAP ROCKS. even if you think otherwise. its so humourous even though it is mildly say angsty. btw. how come your stories somehow take a angsty turn? at least most of them. :( |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 22, | oh-hohs. thats interesting. how come only rhys remembers? cuz hes king. hahas. AND I KNOW SEDONA'LL PULL THROUGH!! she has to! T-T i get lucifers power. at least you are (currently) portraying it the way people would expect. haha. they'll get back together right. right~? |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 21, | HUH?~! THAT WAS SO INCOMPLETE. *frowns* 6 months. how long did lucifer talk to sedona? what did he do to her? rah rah rah. RAH. *pouts**growls* you MEANIE! : |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 20, | haha. i liked your response. stuff like that do happen. but neways, i like the concept of hell hole. you seem to keep taking different perspectives of so many things which were sterotyped. if i werent a strong believer, i'd probably've been swayed. but i just find your particular story all the more amusing. :) |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 19, | woahh. thats a nice way to show their past relationshipp.. poor eyerch. :'( whys sedona in darkness? huhx. i'll read on. btw i think rhys is manipulative. its part of his 'cool' trait. haha. |
| zakei 2005-09-22 ch 18, | oh? funny chapter. gabriel is corny. much unlike the bible description. but this is fiction, so i'll be open minded. hahas. who is lunasun btw? and you can actually just reach heaven like that. woohs. easy way~ |
| zakei 2005-09-20 ch 16, | WOW. i dunno if this is my 2nd review, but ill say this chapter ROCKS. it was so much info in such a small amt of time. the pegasi were good, it was something like a 'im sorry'? in any case this chapter was good. kill celia anyone? i know we all want to kill jedran. :) |