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| MySweetPrince 2004-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseTis powerful and the words you used at catchy..well that's what I thought. It got my complete attention lol. but its well written and powerful. keep it up |
| Tom Madden 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abusereally good. the repetitive stanza has a good impact. nice work. |
| Stefen 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was very effective. |
| MODERNDANCER 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abusethis is cool, it sounds like a song. Its like, one AM so I cant actually think right now. but it was a good poem |