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| Account 2005-03-24 ch 1,   | Yes, like I said, I read so many of your things...and why did I not leave a comment? Maybe I forgot or something really lame. |
| Marie York 2004-09-13 ch 1, | o.o Well I liked it. *blinks stupidly* That's all I really have to say. Just short and bittersweet. ^_^ |
| forgotten-magick 2004-07-16 ch 1, | true, so very depressingly true. |
| Hallucinogen Orange 2004-06-28 ch 1, | I love it. I like your reality-check, it made me smile a bitter smile. |
| freethephoenix 2004-06-28 ch 1, | I might argue the easy point. In most suicide cases the act of suicide is hard to go through with, the person is nervous, depressed, and scared. It's a tough choice to make. I'd probably use the word 'simple', because slitting your own wrist is a simple motion, but not an easy one. However, the word easy goes along well with your ending. Very nice writing. |