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Reviews For: Nature's Gift
J.Preston 2004-07-04 . chapter 1
Fantastic.
I love Haiku's precisely because they awaken very vivid clear images usch as the one you skillfully draw. Great work. More of this please
Odyssey2469 2004-06-28 . chapter 1
A good start, but I have never been a fan of three line poems, you could really add a lot to this. You have the idea, now build from it, describe the storm, or the glass that it leaves behind. I love the wording that you have already, but there is just so much more you could add.
Keep up the good writing, but please add more!
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