 Odyssey2469 2004-06-28 . chapter 1A good start, but I have never been a fan of three line poems, you could really add a lot to this. You have the idea, now build from it, describe the storm, or the glass that it leaves behind. I love the wording that you have already, but there is just so much more you could add.
Keep up the good writing, but please add more! |