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| Sharakinpaix 2006-08-17 ch 1,   | Hi Khaydarin! Long time no read! This is one of the few poems I've ever read that have drawn me in so softly. Among my favorite lines: "Never, forever, is a very long time." Absolutely beautiful. |
| Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2005-07-19 ch 1, | This is very interesting. More than half of it sounded like it was written by someone in the Middle Ages, with all the thee and thy and thou, which is probably what it was supposed to sound like. And, then, once in a while, there was a break. "I love thee" goes write into "I hate you" not "I hate thee" or "I loathe thee" or something more earlier century. :) So you also manage to keep it a little modern, remind people that this still applies, which is great.I don't typically read love stuff, but I was browsing and the title caught my eye. :) Way to blend paradigm shifts into real life. :) I've only ever really heard them refer to science, but, then, the only place other than Jurassic Park that I've heard them mentioned is from my aunt, who finally told me it's pronounced pair-uh-dime not pair-uh-dim. (Hey, it was an honest mistake.) :)Anyway, great job on this.Namarie--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi |