It's sounds so simple, but it goes so much deeper than that... I love it!

This was a very good poem. I kind of got drifted away in it all, I went into a very vivid vision of it. Hmm, I'm kind of still in that vivid vision of it all. Well, like I said before, It's a very good poem.

yay! i like this one! i love poems that ask questions and then give an answer, or at least an attempt at an answer, even if it is a rhetorical question... :P

I really like the way you established this, just the right amount to make it real, but still with its own shadowy corners. great.
mezzie

nice descriptions.. very intriguing.. i wonder what is she writing...

This one's pretty good, but I'm still not quite sure if I really understand it...

awesome...definitely one of my favorites from you.