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kalariah
2004-06-29
ch 1, 		abuseThe paradoxical way you've written this is thoroughly enchanting. It's interesting to see it told from an observer's point of view. I especially like the last two lines: "carefully, cautiously, one eye on the vision." Very nice.
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