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oddlyintrospective
2004-06-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very sweet poem. All of your poems are from the heart. I live your word choice. Try larger vocabulary and maybe a happy poem? Anway, besides those SMALL (very small, just some ideas I thought of, but don't feel obliged to use them) factors, I love all your poems. Please take a look at some of mine if you like! :)
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