this is short but sweet

oh i love it. its sorta short but thats ok. short and sweet. i like the structure as well. great job. write on.

tightly written...good work

short, but meaningful as well. it takes skill to put so much emotion in such a handful of words. 0)

That's sweet. It's sad, but it's got sumthin sweet to it. I dunno. Great job!

that was so sweet...i absolutely loved it! i can definitely relate, and i think you did a wonderful job with this! i thought the rhythm was awesome, great poem!

That is so sweet and sad all at once... and it has a ring of truth to it, too. I know, because I have a tendancy to be really shy when I'm meeting new people.

interesting.. im nto shy so I cant relaly relate

Short and perfectly formed.
Loved it
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
I'd value your thoughts on some of my work if you're interested.