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Random Reader 07 2004-06-29 . chapter 1
This is the first time ive read anything from this cite. I really liked your poem i thought it was funny it had me laughing. You're poetry is very good. It kinda sounded like something Miroku would say if you know who im talking about. Keep up the great job.
Buh-Bye ^_^
MODERNDANCER 2004-06-28 . chapter 1
ok, that poem is a little weird. I can respect it though, you didnt write it all pervy or anything. it seems like a good poem, but somehow "boobs" doesnt seem to fit. "breats" would sound much better, to me.
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