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| Sally-andersonn 2006-12-18 ch 2,  | abuseI thought it would be more of an essay style, not narrative style though. I reckon Emma and John should have waited just a few more months. Their relationship isn't abusive, and John doesn't seem to take advantage of Emma. I suppose this isn't too bad, I've seen worse ;). Well written in an engaging style. |
| princess max 2005-10-18 ch 3, | abuseI've read the same book; the one about the girl with scholiosis (sp?) who had the cast. It's pretty good, and other than 'Mullaway' is the only book aimed at teenagers (that I remember) that includes female masturbation. |
| M L 2005-03-14 ch 2, | abuseIs this going to be one chapter? That's ok, but I'm looking forward to the other subjects as well. Have you tried writing in first person POV? Your 3rd person works, but I think you would be better writing in 1st person by your style. Try making each subject in a different light or writing style. I think it would work really well for this collection. And don't be afraid to jump inbetween stories. You don't have to finish one story before beginning another. I love your idea and I'm jealous you thought of it. I'll definitely come back when you update. |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-29 ch 2, | abuseO.O My god you write brillantly. ~ Noelle ~ |
| sitaloire 2004-11-19 ch 2, | abuseHm. I really like it. It's so unusual to find a student/teacher fic that isn't all WILDKINKYSEXOMG. |
| forgotten-magick 2004-07-17 ch 2, | abusevery nice, i really hope you continue. it's going quite well from where i'm sitting. |
| Fedallah 2004-07-02 ch 2, | abuseKeep going, keep going! Even if you're not sure if a story's going well, just keep writing. Write whatever the hell you want and I swear people will like it. It's awesome so far, you're a good writer. This series of stories is going to be so frickin' awesome. |
| Lya S 2004-07-02 ch 2, | abuseAbsolutely ... perfect. Just perfect, really. The idea abt sexual taboos is capturing, but more than that you are a great writer. I love the feel and style of your work, plus no shoddy paragraphing, as some people will tend towards. Overall, I love it so far (No duh) and am interested to see how you develop this. Kudos. |
| samdro87 2004-07-02 ch 1, | abuseWhere are the stories?! |
| Fedallah 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abuseScore! Yes, please continue! This, this is what I've been searching for! Oh, you are ** God, you are. As unorthodox as possible! I ** love you! |