wow! Amazing, Great idea, well thought out, wonderfully written in great detail.. utterly awesome!

I was going to send a review to this story the other day, but my computer at home always crashes so I had to wait ti ll I was at school. Anyway, I absolutely LOVE the beginning of this story. It's smart, it's well thought out, it's imaginative. You've used some excellent despcription and your narrative style is brilliant. I REALLY hope you update it soon please! I really want to know what's going to happen. This story is really unique. Keep up the good work! Please please please please! Or else I shall be very sad :-(!