I like this. :)

Whoa, I LOVED the last line. The "smile, not fake" line was a little forced. But the last line rocked.

I have something I wrote that doesn't REALLY match this..

Why do I keep doing it?I fall knwoing you won't catch meI dream without a hope to go off of.

And something I can't remember. But your poem flowed GREAT, expect me in your future work.

This poem is so touching ! Sorry im to lazy to sign in now ill R&R your other stories too. ( as soon as i get a chance to read them that is

I'm always amazed at people that can rhyme like that and not put meanningless words just to make it flow. In yours, every word had it place and meaning. Awesome! The title is very appropriate also. Well done! ^_^

heyy! this is very well written! i really love the way you write!
P.S-Please update What I want in a Guy My computer crashed and im gettin a new one so i wont be able to update Forever My Protector until a few days from now but please review it when i do! ^_~

hey, ok i've been reading your stuff for a while and never been able to update because of too much work, but now i've finished exams and no more work until next year so here goes...
i love this poem and its so good. it seems so heartfelt and comes across as if you're experiencing it now or have experienced it before.
all your other stuff is so good too, so keep writing!

that was cool-kinda intense and yet sophisticated! good work!