This is a great story! Why don't you keep up with it? I love the gentle humor in the first chapter, with Jeff talking to the ceiling. There's so many unanswered questions, and I'm dying to know the answers! Please add more!

lol, this story's awesome Autumn, the fact that you're writing a story with me in it is funny :P I wanna read more, does that make me self-centered? I don't know, you created me

i like this story, its very discriptive and i can connect w/ the artist aspect... i love to draw :)

Me don't like the sound of that art fair guy... He sounds like he's gonna try and get Serena to fall in love with him. I hate those people XP Me say that Jeff goes over and punches his teeth out :D Anyway, I like this chapter... except that guy, I thought it was good. Nay! Great! Jeff reminds me of me, cos im almost always alone in my house doing something cos my mom (I dont live with my dad) is out most of the time. Well anyway, keep writing and give us all a happy ending, kay?

yay! you finally updated! i was begining to think you gave up on this story! awesome chapter. can't wait for the next!
Rin

Yay! This just left me wanting more! Ok, so maybe it IS my fault for more, but it's not a bad thing...
~`~`~Pinky~`~`~

*claps* hehe Jeff *laughs maniacly* I love it Autumn, keep this one running, it's good! better than my crap. I have the worst case of WB...yeah yeah Gora, excuses excuses. Well, I'll either call you soon or else see you in 3 weeks and 3 days...Loves!

Oh Autumn! It's so cute..yet sweet too because its about Jeff...heehe
~PinkyCD

this is good you should keep going
I wonder what happens
Please keep writing
ttul
Alyssa

yay! you updated! yes, AFI does rock...and so does this story!
Rinfirithiel

aww! I love soppy stories :D I wish something like this would happen to me :( *talking to himself* a girl who isnt an air head, and can look after themselves...like me*come back to reality* oh! this is a good story, I dont know why people dont read it! The art teacher "mrs knight" reminds me of my art teacher. anyway keep writing, you should try and advertise it somewhere, go on some dating chatrooms and put the link on it or something.

I can tell this story is going to be really great! I especially like the AFI-ness in the title ^_^. I'm looking forward to updates!!
~Rinfirithiel