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| unwashed heathen 2008-12-01 ch 1, | Needs moar update :[. Its been over a year, have you officially given up on this? |
| Feere Gorone 2008-07-25 ch 15, | Great work as always, though it has been a year since you posted this. I'm looking foreword to finding out what happens to Ark and co. Have you considered sending this to a publishing company? It's really good. |
| The Orange Cow 2008-06-01 ch 14, | Heh. Just been reading over some of the other reviews, where everyone is demanding(lawl) that you put those old stories up. All I gotta say is that they are your stories, and that you took them down because you obviously wanted to. End of story, in my opinion (hehe, a pun XD). Don't let people like that tell you want to do. Although, now that I think about,I guess that by saying this, I'm also telling you what to do, in a sense... >. |
| The Orange Cow 2008-06-01 ch 15, | I gotta say, I'm really glad I found this. It is defiantly real quality work; you have a great writing style that keeps the readers attention(good grammar is another plus). Thanks for posting it! I hope real life sorts itself out some for you, and I certainly hope you are able to post more of this in the future. By the way, I really hope this doesn't sound antagonizing, but I have say that this is a huge improvement over your Zelda works. |
| unwashed heathen 2007-10-27 ch 15, | Wow, two in a row! Great dude! Sorry about all that stuff that happened, that really sucks. The story itself rocks, as usual. |
| jk9000 2007-10-25 ch 15, | Dude. Awesome. |
| Arcia 2007-10-25 ch 15, | Aha! Finally the plot revealed! That was interesting! All these new interesting characters are going to make the future very interesting indeed! Hadn't heard from you in a while, thought you had given up. It's good to have you back |
| Warrior of Winds 2007-10-24 ch 15, | Wow, very interesting. Can't wait to find out more about this organazation. Update soon, plus I'm really happy that you updated sooner than usual. |
| the violet eyes 2007-10-15 ch 14, | hooray! i was so excited to see the letter in my inbox saying you'd updated. sure, it sucks you don't update often but life is life and i'm perfectly willing to wait and i bet there are pleanty of others out there willing to wait too. keep up the awsome work. i laughed out loud so often while reading this chapter that my family probably thinks i'm a crazy person now. i can't wait for your next chapter so don't give up or anything okay?? |
| jk9000 2007-10-14 ch 14, | Hey, this exists! Neat. |
| Warrior of Winds 2007-10-14 ch 14, | Yeah, you updated, very good job as usual. Update soon. |
| Gastogh 2007-06-05 ch 13, | The cast is rather few in number, but I trust that will change as time passes. I expect the intent isn't to forge through everything with just three real characters. The only real criticism I have concerns the update rate, but that's not exactly news. |
| CovertJaguar 2007-06-04 ch 13, | I too read your Zelda stories and thought they were terrific, some of the best stories I've read on these sites. I saddens me greatly to hear that you have removed them. I had planned on showing them to my girlfriend at some point, I guess that's not possible now. Why write if no one will read your stories? I've read so many great stories on these sites, but that was a couple years ago. I come back to check on them and it seems several of my favorites are gone. I tell you, its almost enough sour to the entire experience of and I'd go so far as to say that its almost killed my enthusiasm for this story as well. What the point if its just going to be deleted later? Maybe I should stick to books. At least they can't be deleted. |
| atheƩ 2007-05-27 ch 13, | As poorly as THE FIVE started out, I thought that ETERNAL ARK was an excellent story. I'm actually rather upset that you've deleted them, as I've just gotten Internet after two years of being broke, and found that my favorite Zelda stories were no longer amongst the living. Anyways, continue with this. It is enjoyable. |
| Dan 2007-05-16 ch 13, | There was that long time when you didn't update this story. I started checking back with the story less and less. I am glad you have added more chapters and hope you update more frequently now. This is really a great story. Keep it up. About those Zelda stories you took down. They were the best Zelda stories I have ever read and have read them at least 4 to 5 times. I think I saved them somewhere, just in case I wanted to read them again. |