Reviews for Louie' s Afterlife

Reviews For: Louie' s Afterlife

Gaki Toki 2006-02-08 ch 4,	YAYS! A chappie for ME?! I'm so loved. Anyways, I loved this chapter! I've been waiting since I lived in NEW YORK for this! That was MONTHS ago! Anyways, this was a wonderful chapter, and you should be proud of yourself. You only just hit me with the actual accent cause I just noticed that I used to talk like they do in New York, not New York City, but near Buffalo mixed with Syracuse...it's different, but some of the words like "dat" and ** like...dat. Haha, anyways, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Amazing! Creatively a masterpiece...and it's a wonder that I get away with reading this in my living room, haha...that's okay though. YAYS! #1 FAN! does little #1 dance I'm number 1! insane laugh GO LOUIS! Long Days and Pleasant Nights! ~Gaki
Michael Dempsey 2005-01-09 ch 3,	Cool story. I admire the whole narrative-in-dialect style, it's a simple and very effective way of bringing out the character. The whole thing is strange, creepy and amusing. I am definitely interested in seeing how it develops.
Mockingbird1999 2004-09-21 ch 3,	Why are you neglecting my favorite author! sob WHY!? She's so cool yet you just ignore her?! You're so cruel...CRUEL AND UNUSUAL!
Slinky Tenshi 2004-09-18 ch 3,	uh, huh...update more often huh?...according to ma sis...you ain't updated in a bit...r u even still there?...lol...ttyl!
Slinky Tenshi 2004-09-15 ch 1,	My sis suggested that i check this out and so far i like it...im adding ya to my lists of favorite authors and alerts
Gaki Toki 2004-08-07 ch 3,	My sister was readin' over my shoulder and man was she ** lol, but she liked it. lol, not like she's gonna tell me to get off itif she likes it...not like I'd get off it anyway.
HeadofVecna 2004-07-10 ch 2,	Ah, this is really some funny stuff. I would quote sections but there are so many. The quasi-magical element makes it more outrageous and humorous. Keep it up!
HeadofVecna 2004-07-10 ch 1,	Very interesting intro, I like the perverse style, namely after a string of gory depictions the "real interesting ** started happening." Also the story blends rivers become tubs etc. I'm not sure who would talk like this (even during interior monologue), but it seems well done.
Gaki Toki 2004-07-08 ch 2,	O.O Squeals with glee YAY! I love this! Even though the language is a little heavey for this young teen, I love the concept! You've gotta be a great hit w/your family and stuff! Since I'm an artist too that takes the attention away from my stories...for now...lol
Gaki Toki 2004-07-03 ch 1,	Eyes wide with excitment...WRITE MORE WRITE MORE, NOW THIS IS MY KINDA STUFF!
Red Vision 2004-06-29 ch 1,	Wow funny stuff, i liked it and very gory. read my stuff , bye

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