First off, I liked your story. It was rather ironic the way Rommel was predicting the future so well, poor guy. There were only two main mistakes I found. Try to keep the verb tenses consistent; present and past together can get confusing. And secondly, having read over five biographies on Rommel and dozens of historical nonfiction, it's a fact that Rommel didn't smoke, and certainly wasn't a chain smoker. Other than that, I found the story enjoyable.

Very nice job! My compliments: Rommel really was a fascinating character, and you portrayed him very well.

I absolutely loved the personalization of Rommel. One of my favorite characters of World War II personally, and it felt good to actually see him portrayed in such a personal manner. Anyone looking to find a good read about one of the greatest Field Marshall's of all time needs to sit down through this one. Excellent.