Awesome. One of my favourite oneshots on this site. xD

Mwahaha... that was full of wonderful smut if I do say so myself. Very interesting characters. They were very strong even if it was a relatively short one-shot in which to develop character. You brought them to life and gave them each personalities that suited them.

Heh... I liked how it was kinda kinky too.

That's a fun word. Say it. Kinky.

I must say that I have rather liked this one. Usually i would pinpoint something that I liked the best...but I thought everything about it was excellent. Actually, I think I did find something; you made Shayan seem very real. Anyways, does the creation of a side fic mean that you will update The Land Where Dragons Rule? Hmm?
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