Thats it you're going on my favorites, you do a wonderful job in expressing your love for Christ and it's nice to see that. Keep writing!

Very cool. I think it is great you are not afraid to say you love God. That soong is so true. God will always love his people no matter what. It gives a great outlook on life. Thanks 4 the reveiw!!

man! this rocks! you did such a good job with this...it's soo going on my favs list. the message is so true and our lyrics are so undeniable they slice into the soul (that's a good thing). absolutely awesome job.

powerfully written! its something i've actually been trying to work on - not caring. i love how you use parentheses to insert in thoughts - i can almost hear the music! great job!

Ah here's another review from my non-christian self about your rock/metal song. I'm not going to say negative things about this (because this is your religion and I respect it) however, as far as the song aspect is concerned, you overused the word "me" far too many times. I would enjoy the first verse, but you use the word "me" two lines in a row, thereby making the first 3 lines of the verse rhyme with "see". Anytime you rhyme anything with the word "see" after that, you also use "me". If there had been 3 more lines and those had all rhymed, then it would at least follow the same pattern. But parts of it rhyme and there is the line with "eyes" that just comes out of nowhere and doesn't seem to fit.
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Most likely, it seems more awkward if it's being read like poetry. If it's being sung and you've got some awesome guitar solos in the middle, then it would be a lot better. At least now I"ve gotten over my preconceived notions that christains and heavy metal don't mix. (Okay, so the idea is still going to take some getting used to)