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Reviews For: Mystical Bird
Neteri Bennu 2005-12-04 . chapter 1
Not bad but did you know that theres an ice phoenix

Ps Bennu= Phoenix in egyptian
DefianceIsMe 2004-07-01 . chapter 1
I think the whole idea behind a phoenix is beautiful. Great job at describing it.
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