Whoa! you got a lot better since the last time I reviewed, nice job!

i like this. very, very, very, relatable adn well done *claps!*

I loved how you captured the promise of tomorrow being a better day, yet it never comes. This is really deep, and I totally understand it. Great job!

YES!this is totally awesome and i love it!
your irish lover

Oh lord! Annie's just popped into my head, and she's singing her "Tomorrow" Song! Well, this is a very good piece. I like the observations, title, and clearly the chorus. Thanks for the observation and reviews!
Magz.

i like the premiss of this. that need to get past all the sh*t and on to the better days.

Great! It really conveys the anger at things getting so hard that all teens face! I can totally relate! It really would make a great song... Keep writing!

Wow, morbid. But good, nontheless. Keep writing!