Just read BlackDog, now I've got the rest of your series to go. You have great, interesting characters. Enough tension described in your story to cure depression. I'd like a little more foreshadowing, because I'm not all that fond of mysteries as a genre. You're doing a good job substaining my interest however. Thank you!

Hi agian! I know I'm talking with you on MSN, but still I had to review... I told you I would.
Story is great... though I still don't like how you ended it. but that's just the romantic idiot in me as you well know... though I AM glad that my Muse and your Muse teamed up...and yes my Muse has finally gotten back to me... he just has to make up his mind on what he wants to give me ideas for...
Toodles! Keep up the good work!

Hey!
awesome story!
although i started rather late (ie. when you were already on the 4th 'book')
i'm gong to read like crazy.. heheheh
keep up the good work...

That was a really rushed ending...but still good...and after all, there's a sequel. Good fun. Kudos!

Ah, irony...poor, poor Jabez...

One little nitpicky thing: "Potential murders aren't my type." ...sorry...I'm a nitpicker.

*Smells romance* Well...I like Jabez...

Gets better and better.

Hmm...I sort of want a description of the city of Metronome...I mean, after seeing a mercenary with a supercomputer and an imp, and an assassin elf, what would the city/world look like? Just a suggestion...

I thought Keena was a mercenary...is there really that much of a difference between mercenaries and assassins...? *is slightly confused by Keena's hatred* Oh. explanation. never mind. I like the interaction of Keena, Yuki, and Id...sarcastic machines are fun.

Ooh...I like Jabez. And all the techno-fantasy stuff. This is very cool.

Refreshingly original...I'll keep reading.

better an better alla time!

o! (again!) Jabez is col! um by the way, you descibed Yuki's head, wings and tail but not his body. wut does the rest of him look like?

O! me like! is something wrong with the glove? hm...