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Silencia 2008-12-24 . chapter 3
lol, sai's clueless!! I'd really wanna see more, but I guess I'll have to wait for awhile huh? Oh well, maybe it won't take to long and I'll be able to read more! Great story and I know what you mean, time flies by, having no time to write!
Grtz Silencia
ps: please check out my stories, they might give you enough inspiration!
selfish4more 2007-12-13 . chapter 3
you can have my support any time,and there is no need for an apology, also I forgot to say good job
Giannini 2007-08-13 . chapter 3
I hope you don't mind, I might make an online webcomic based on this =D
Grape 2005-07-25 . chapter 3
*laughs* Poor Yumi!! Such a predicament she is in!! But this is really funny..I hope the next chapter is posted soon..
Angel's worst nightmare 2005-07-24 . chapter 3
hehehe, keep up the good work. I'll be smiling (and having magic fire apear aroudn me but that's not the point).
shibi chibi 2005-07-20 . chapter 3
ehh...Maya's scary O__Oll||l
Rosegirl18 2005-07-14 . chapter 3
Update! Update now!
jessicaknows 2005-06-17 . chapter 3
Are you going to update soon or not? T-T i'm so excited about your stories but you just leave me hanging like that.
Lady Katreina 2005-06-15 . chapter 3
*whistles* Yay! Rah, rah! Thankyou! ^_^
Bu 2005-06-14 . chapter 3
hey! You updated! :P Glad to see your alive ;) but what i see from your livejournal you're pretty busy. All is forgiven, hehehe. Sorry about the late review... my account decided it would be fun to wait a while to send me this a couple weeks late. *grumbles and pokes email account with a pointy stick* I loved the chapter! hehe, "I'm fine with playing a guy, but I WILL NOT WEAR A BEARD." this reminds me of my 8th grade drama class... >_>;; an odd bunch, they were. X) Thanks for the update! Update soon! Bye!~bu
Ebony Glasse 2005-05-29 . chapter 3
OMG This is SO good! pls pls pls pls hurry up n update!
Rock My Socks 2005-05-26 . chapter 3
Oh, that was SO cool! Now you'll have to update lots and lots...

The only problems I had were minor gramatical ones. They were probably typos, anyway...
Love, Lulu 2005-05-26 . chapter 3
Haha! The wedding dress scene reminded me of my friends and me when we were looking for prom dresses. I relate to the torture that Maya went through...girly dresses, overzealous friends...didn't run into anyone though, thank goodness. Anywho, good job, hope to see more soon, and DON'T FORGET ABOUT AVERAGE GIRL!

Love,Lulu
subtleline 2005-05-25 . chapter 3
Welcome back for the releam of dead authors. I have yet to b resurrected but...eh. This made up for everything. Yumi in a wedding dress...beautiful. And Aki and Shu entertain me to no end. Still Yumi's my fav. Hope to get to update a lil more over the summer before school swallows u up again.
Ryu 2005-05-25 . chapter 3
ah, about time. thank you for the update! ~_^
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