THIS IS IT! this is the poem ive been waiting for! in case you havent figured it out the reason i read your older work 1st is so that i can see how youre style has developed... how youve poem means alot since i now know that youve depended on your friends so much in youre life (at least the parts youve written about ) and now you feel strong enough to fend for yourself. Very well written Lovely spactacular !
Nat

that was REALLY good. keep up the awesome work!

Hey Erin, this is great! I LOVE it!
My favorite lines:
The feathers catching the sun, reflecting it back,; My voice returns to me again unheard
I really love the imagry there. Good job! :)

Nice job, really good writing again. I have no doubts you can make it on your own.

Nice poem, it seems to have quite a strong, hidden message.

I like that. You write with passion, and that's cool because i know some people that don't. I really like your writings.

I like it! enjoyable, happier sounding than many of the other poems that I've read here, it sounds so hopeful!
Please write more!

Beautiful poem. I love the words and emotions in this poem. Wonderful work!

wonderful, just wonderful. youre strong, you can make it on your own, no question bout it.

wonderful, just wonderful. youre strong, you can make it on your own, no question bout it.