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Beyond-the-Shadows
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abusehaha this is cool
emerald
2008-07-05
ch 1, anon.
abuse...But their chemistry was apparent and entertaining:).
emerald
2008-07-05
ch 1, anon.
abuse"I know. I don't understand myself either. Tell me what you think. )"- Lol, yeah...that was great. Very interesting, I wouldn't exactly want to play those kinds of games with my hubby...I hold grudges:P. B
FM Radio
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseI like this, but i like the one i just reviewed better, sorry i never really read the title, i just kinda read the summary and went O!! MUST READ! :)
dawn's unforgiving darkness
2006-07-06
ch 1,
abusewhat the hell, if they make each other jealous, and they know this, then why do they...well...do whatever they do?

I really don't understand why people cheat, i mean if they wanted someone else, then breakup or get a fricken devorce!
Maroon
2006-04-26
ch 1,
abuse(lol to your comment at the end.) I liked this it had that glamourous - i cant think of another word that fits as well even if it sounds silly- delicious feel to it. Your descriptions were smooth, eloquent and detailed, but I know what you mean when you have it pictured so perfectly in your head but putting it into words if difficult, I get that a lot.

(I am irritated by my own writing. I am like a violinist whose ear is true, but whose fingers refuse to reproduce precisely the sound he hears within - a quote ive always remembered, its what you were talking about reminded me of.I can't remember who said it.)

So yeh Im liking this short story yes its of a simular nature as the other one, but still i like it. You lull the reader in a false sense about something then twist it at the end...nice. Anyway glad I found you on here amongst the dozens of borish writers. Kepp writing your short stories, i like, i like a lot!

Maroon
the devil herself
2005-12-04
ch 1,
abuseoh scandalas
LilLaTLuv
2005-10-13
ch 1,
abuseHey!

Okay...Weird, but definitely well written. Is it some kind of game they play to turn each other on? Really freaky, but I've heard of worse. And, hey, whatever floats your boat! So, your writing style is genius, I have to say, that surprise twist is definitely cool. I thought it was absolutely great, the confusion, I don't like so much, but part of the thrill was not knowing exactly what was going on. It's fatastic, though. UPDATE DANGEROUS LIASONS PLEASE?!? And make more interesting short stories, if you please. ;)

Luv ya,Tashi :)
satinsmoke
2005-09-17
ch 1,
abuseoh. very very very nicely written. loved the imagery.
bulletproof.cupid
2005-08-15
ch 1,
abuseWoah... that was really good. They way you made everything so relevant. He was her husband - that first guy, not only that he was kissing another woman. Damn, I admire youre writing. You've got skills! This could be a scene in Mr. & Mrs. Smith ^^ Lol you'd make one helluva director. Take care missy and keep on writing. L8er,

~Bubblegum
ntht
2005-07-27
ch 1,
abuseAmazingly plotted, if that made sense. The scenes played out beautifully.Update Dangerous Liasons would ya? :)
Jealous
2005-03-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhat can I say? I was drawn to read this once again and once again, I'm drowning in envy of you. I hate you, did you know that? You and your damn good stories! A curse upon you! *cackles* I want your talent. Give it to me! Please? I'll give you anything you want. My house, my kilt, my wife! Right, you won't get that if you didn't listen to the radio ad. OKay, I'm done. So when is "The Art of War" coming out? ... where is a Scorpio when you need one? lol *grins* Love you, too :)
Working hard hardly working
2004-10-24
ch 1,
abuseRight. Someone's going onto my favorite authors list
ThirteenSugars
2004-09-21
ch 1,
abuseThe heck...these are well written pieces. Goodness, how come my convoluted brain never gave out ideas like these? Hm, maybe because I'll just blunder the whole thing if I even try! (laughs)
Well, they're really great and I'm very impressed and truly fascinated...you're definitely going in my Authors'-to-stalk-list. ^_^
diSasteRangL
2004-09-16
ch 1,
abusewow, great details! it's no wonder you write such wonderful stories!
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