I think it's wonderful! :D Really. It's great. :D -Ally B.

Aw!! This story was so cute! Justin was so scary in the beginning but then he turned out awesome! Plus Yoshi and Kira were pretty cool too! I really liked your story!!

...MUAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!... i knew those 2 would be together... who isnt fond of their stalker?

Why did it haf' ta' end?! Ilove that story! Please make a sequal!

That was great! well. . .thats all I can say.

yay, i liked it! the ending was so sweet. i'm glad everything worked out. keep writing! see you again if/when you write more!

Ah its over. 10/10, anyway plz there has got to be a sequel

You left the ending wide open...not that I mind. That was some conclusion. Ugh, Melody turned to be a such a childish brat. Justin seemed to have the most character development in the whole story since he seems to be the most 3-dimensional. Now that you finished this story...maybe you can complete Dreamland Japan before I lost all hope of any chance of you finishing it?

Best story ever! What a perfect ending for this story! I loved it so much! -^_^-

I'd just started reading your story today, and I'm surprised that I was able to finish it all in one sitting (I'm usually a bit impatient, and that's my loss...*sighs*). It's a very lighthearted story, which I like, and you've made the interactions between characters fun to read, so that I forgot about the length entirely. I do think that Justin and Yoshi make better friends than lovers, for some reason. They're definitely a likeable pair. And everyone hating Melody is a bit harsh; she's a lot like her brother in that she would go to great lengths to get what she wants, and I think it takes a lot of guts. Great job!

whoot! i go to the manga section to see if my story is up yet and BHAM! i see this story! ^_^ *is happy and does a happy happy dance* i have been checking several times a day everyday since the last chapter for an update. ^^; so yay! the ending is satisfactory! it would have been interesting if justin said he was going back to boarding school... i wonder what yoshi would do... anywho, hope to see more stories from you! =D bye bye!

Wow... it's really nice... da ending gave me a fuzzy fuzzy and lasting feeling... luv it! so... hm... hm... uh... well, good luck on your further projects! luvit!

YOUR STORY IS GREAT! I LOVE IT! and Melody deserves to die... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! BURN IN HELL DAMMIT!
*runs round with his pants off

WHHAA!!?? I hate Melody. x_x; She's such an inconsiderate.. yeah~ XD
I wasn't expecting her to win, either. ;-;
Well, I hope Justin doesn't have to go back to boarding school somehow!
Post more soon! The suspense is kiling me! XD;

*horrorstricken* so is Justin REALLY gonna go back to his boarding school? and dat damn wretch Melody! how could she do dat to Yoshi? and... uh... well... is Yoshi uhh... kinda started liking Justin? oh well, anything. juz make sure you update sooner this time... and... ONE MORE? wat do u mean? *plonk*