:D that was hot. XD haha
thanks for this oneshot! i loved it! lol :) :) :)

good story i like to reread sometimes but i was reading it this time and i noticed the medications she metions is a heartburn medication zantac. I think you ment xanax it's an anti- anxiety medicaton or zolft an antidepresseant, sorry i work in a pharmacy i noticed that

cute story, i loves it

aw great story! ~ Alenor

Ah another great story, but like another one of your stories ( I don't really remember what it's called even though I just read it, it's the one where she, an Isabel I think, gets into cliched messes) you keep changing points of view. You use 'I blah blah blah' referring to the female main character, the you suddenly change to 'She blah blah blah'. I'd say if you want to imporve your stories, read over them again and be consistent with the narrative point of view (third person) and first-person.

absolutely brilliant writing and plot. love it

aww i loved it heaps, and once again, like with all of your one shots, i wish it wasnt a one shot. :( but it was still awesome.

This was an awesome one-shot. I really liked it :P.

i love this so much..

very cute!
xx

that was a good one shot..wow...was that a hot scene...lol..its very good...i loved it..lol...bye..bye...

I love this one shot,it totally rocks! Great job and all that!

You have a talent in writing. This is really good! :)

Cute, but I [i]am[/i] wondering how old they are...But oh well. Keep it up!

It was cool.