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| Water Block 2006-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it. Kinda ocol. |
| abc123 chewy 2005-12-21 ch 8, | abuseawesome... plz continue! |
| DreamGirl101 2005-09-07 ch 8, | abuseRevieW rated Pg 13 like what is going on here!when is Melena Breaking it off with Adeirn?why isn't she still made at Hunterr?when is hunter breking it oss with the Sluty, trashy, ** Of a girl named Brittany? |
| Dirty Secret 2005-06-05 ch 8, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this story. You just *have* to update |
| pinkisyourfriend 2005-05-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseI AM REALLY MAD AT YOU, THERE'S A NAME FOR PEOPLE LIKE YOU, DO YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS? WELL I DON'T HAVE A WORD FOR IT BUT YOUR NOT THE FIRST ONE. yOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DON? OKAY, YOU HAVN'T WRITTEN IN 8 MONTHS! THAT'S ALONG TIME AND IN YOUR A YEAR IN THE LIFE OF A SUPERMODELS SISTER YOU SAID YOU DIDN'T ABADON US, WELL IF THIS ISN'T ABONDENMENT THAN WHAT IS IT? HUNH HUNH. yEESH, YOU HAVE NO GOOD REASON TO STOP WRITING YOU WONDERFUL STORIES, YOU GET A TON OF REVIES, LIKE 200 MORE THAN THE AVERAGE WRITER AND STILL YOU DON'T WRITE! I MEAN WHAT YOU'VE DONE IS PRETTY IMPRESSIVE, WRITTEN 6 CHAPTERS IN A MONTH AND 10 DAYS, I KNOW SOMEONE WHO IT HAS TAKEN HER 3 YEARS TO WRITE ELEVEN CHAPTERS! OKAY SO WHY SLOW DOWN? YOU WERE AT THE PEAK OF YOUR WRITING AND YOU JUST HAD TO STOP, SO I PROPOSE YOU WRITE SOMETHING TO SATISFY US, SOMETHING GOOD, FOR ALL YOUR STORIES (PREFERABLY A DAY IN THE LIFE AND THIS ONE)IN TWO WEEKS OR I WILL REALLY BE MIFFED AND NAG YOU UNTIL YOU WRITE MORE. well buh bye, and have a nice day |
| Grape 2005-01-02 ch 8, | abuseThis is a really good story! *laughs* How in the world are you going to manipulate this book where Hunter gets the girl and his best friend without a fight..? This is interesting..but I kinda feel sorry for Brittany and Adrian. Write the next chapter soon..This is great! |
| songyeonjoo 2004-10-08 ch 8, anon. | abusepleeaasse finish dis!! ^^ iss relli gud! keep going! |
| quiksilva brumby 2004-09-11 ch 8, | abuseM..great story so far! Ur an excellent writer! I don't have time to write a long review, but yeah. Keep writing and update soon! luv ~brumby~ xx |
| jegan 2004-09-11 ch 8, | abuseo sweet this story is really cool is Hunter his real name or just a nickname?...either way..COOL! pls update soon and ur other stories too *smiles* |
| blak pearl 2004-09-09 ch 8, | abuseI'm loving this so much! i can't wait for Malana and Hunter to get together! anyway i relaly really really hav to go but i jus wanna leave u with 1 wise word UPDATE |
| egg-n-head 2004-09-06 ch 8, | abuseThis story is great you have a great style and it's got me hook line and sinker i love your stories and im addicted to them now keep up your great work egg-n-head |
| quotata 2004-08-28 ch 8, | abuselol... ur stories r so dramatic... |
| FlamingHeart109 2004-08-18 ch 8, | abuseI like, I like. Update soon please ^.^ |
| MeGGerZ 2004-08-17 ch 8, anon. | abuseBleh.lol.sha. well update soon biatch.heehee. im kinda hyper right now so its hard to fomr cmoplete sentenceslol. sha. n well. yea.lol |
| MeGGerZ 2004-08-17 ch 8, anon. | abuseBleh.lol.sha. well update soon biatch.heehee. im kinda hyper right now so its hard to fomr cmoplete sentenceslol. sha. n well. yea.lol |