Hey!
thas a great poem. u got great vocabulary and an amazing talent of putting words together and making it sound so unique! great job. and thanks for the reveiw of "a waste of breath"

Very good...I especially like the contrast between the beginning and ending of the poem. Excellently done; keep writing, and thanks for the review of 'So Precious Little Time.' I'm glad you liked it )

wow, beautiful poem. i loved the wording. it flowed well, which is hard to do with this scattered rhyming. i loved it.

Wow, I really liked this. The meter and such were just great. I also like the rhyme scheme, how sometimes you had just a "vowel" sound rhyme (where the ending consonants aren't quite the same. . . do I even know whatI'm talking about?) I think this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Do you read poetry a lot, or something?