So o you ever plan on coming back?
This story was too goo to put to rest.
Please come back.

i love it and wish you would update. but it odesn't appear that is going to happen...ah, se la ve. but it is great, i love soccer, i love the characters...hehe, and i love the way nick thinks...quite impressive, really. yay, magically un-drop this and update! please? well, it's good and i creally like it. bye

now listen here, person. I've waited YEARS for you to update, so...UPDATE!

This is a good story. It isn't mindless sex or anything. Good job.

Sorry I didn't log in for this! (bows apologetically) Now...down to business...CAN I HAVE HIRO?!?!?!?!?! Heh...I love this...you should update it...you really should...I'll love you forever...really...I will...

I like this story lots. So you should update it. Please? I want to read more and it's such a great plot line. Do it.

Refreshingly original. Impatiently awaiting the end of your hiatus.

Gah! Only a prologue and two chapter, but I'm already desperately in love with this story. Will there be an update any time soon?

lol! I absolutely love your summary! Great story too!

eheeheeheehee! more! more!

awsomeness!

So far my favorite character is Hiro. I love his lets-throw-a-book-at-Chris-so-he-can-be-quiet way. You got me surprised at the first sentence of this chapter XD I really thought Hiro was a girl too.

Graet job! I expect to read more so please update soon!

Hahaha love it. Chris' straight-foward-ness amuses me so.

Wow... great beginning. I love how you started the story. It got me reading 'til the end. :D

Aww! Poor Chris. I love 'im. He's totally awesome! Hiro & Elias seem pretty cool too. Can't wait to read more! Update soon!