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| thinkTwice Nfall 2008-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseWhen I first started reading your story, I considered simply skipping to the end since I have ADD and usually prefer stories with dialogue and action. But your story drew me in and made me have to think along with the story. I almost ended up crying as the story progressed. Your story was beautiful, and it was powerfully written. The unique writing style helped bring the theme and tone across, too. I really enjoyed your story. It was awesome and pretty emotional. (I don't think there were any mistakes either. Not any that I remember, anyway. Kudos!) |
| gulistanlik 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWow.This was so...enchanting? gripping? influencing? All of them in one? I loved it! This was...wow. I really hate that I'm having trouble in describing how exactly this fic made me feel- it was amazing, in a word. A job well done. This is definitely favourited. I was a little lost on why Chazzy does this to herself, though. So why does she? Gulistanlik |
| xfail 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was a beautiful, touching story. I loved the way you described everything in a way that made it all seem ethereal and glowing, and yet real and thought-provoking at the same time. You're an amazing writer; don't forget it. |
| Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. I love the mood you set with this, and the way you don't give one paragraph description of Chastity but draw it out so the reader discovers bits and pieces as you read the story. It was beautiful. One of my favourite parts is when she says "If only someone had told me that I was not the only freak to ever be born. I would have spared myself a lot of problems." Because it's true for everyone who thinks they're the only freak. Much love, Aero |
| luv me like no other 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. It was amazing, and I am so touched. Wow. It was mindblowing. lol. I love this piece, and I can't wait to read more by you. |
| brittle hearts 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseIndescribably beautiful. |
| Catari 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abusewow. i loved this story. your style of writing is really captivating, i found myself trying to read faster because i was very drawn in. loved the use of the wings and her reflections back throughout the story. this is a beautiful story, thank you for sharing it. |
| RedBerries 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseStarting reading one of your other fics, which you haven't finished :(, so thought I'd give the others a go as well! Amazing one-shot, it says so much, keep writing! |
| Written 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abusewow! awesome. beautiful. |
| maho,shojo 2005-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was beautiful... i started reading it, just because..when my mom came in and started yelling at me for not sleeping... But i had to finish this story! and now it's 2:30 in the morning... And man am i tired.. but it was worth it. This was Amazing. Thank you for writing it... for posting it... for allowing me and everyone else the pleasure of this story. ~Maho.Shojo |
| sompersen 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abusewow that was incredible so very touching |
| tomato-greens 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet. |
| Chocolate Herrings 2004-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. While I read it, it felt like I was somwhere else. Like I was watching someones dream. Absolutely amazing feeling. "Does the walker choose the path, or the path the walker?" |
| onetwothree123 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseYour story... I don't know how to put it into words... It's enchanting and breath-taking. I'm not sure how to describe the feeling... I guess I was in a "dream-state" when I was reading it (that's the best word I could think of, "dream-state.") I really enjoyed reading it. =D |
| cbprice25 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAw... I enjoyed that. |