Oh, nicely done! I like how some of the lines seem stunted, having too few syllables to maintain the expected rhythm. It gives a feeling of injury and shortness of speech, as if the speaker has been...shot with an arrow! XD It gets better and better up until the end, and then it's just perfect. The last line is an excellent one, and I commend you on your excellent titlework. Oh yes, and your first verse is very rich in imagery, which I like very much. :) Great work again! ~MJ

That was really good Kris, very honest and sweet, came right form the heart lol peace!

*Raises eyebrow* Heavy Greek mythology, hmm? A tone that doesn't suit you at all. Other than that, I don't know what to say... And that drives me nuts! But we're told there's a time to talk and a time to stand silent. In our folly, it's hard to see which one is which. Interesting poem however. O.o Forsenics and Greek mythology... Bizarre.

Well... what to say? what to say?
Talk to me. Please. I've spilled my all to you now it's your turn. Tell me how you're feeling. I want to listen, it's just that you're not talking. Please tell me what your going through.
It's a little angsty. I'm not entirely sure if you're glad that this feeling has surfaced or not. It almost sounds as if you can't decide. Poem-wise: nice work. Life-wise: talk to me...
I love you.