This is a powerful piece. I love when formatting is different than conventional poetry, because it really signifies that this poem is trying to convey more than just words. It really has feeling to it.

You know, the summary is almost a poem in itself.

I think "callous" is a great adjective to use before itching and wishing. It's not one most people would usually think of. Great job on this.

This one really strikes deep...Moreso because it makes me wonder whom inspired it - and that power alone makes for a powerful work.