This story is starting to pick up now. It is real life. Backstabbings and human nature are caused by greed so youre working on character development. This isnt like anything else youve written so far. Quality yes, but action no. I like it and keep up the good work.

You're writing is very self focused, which I like or I wouldn;t be reviewing this in such an optimistic manner. I can't tell if this is just a simulation or real life. Everytime I can't believe its fake, you bring up regen points. I also saw a show like this, it was a short Independent film. It was called the game. It was a spoof on reality shows. It took a bunch of people and told them that the last person left living would win millions of dollars. A dark comedy to say the least considering one of the characters was a pregnent woman and one of the other contestants was her baby's daddy. Anyway, I hope to see a plot form soon after all this senseless killing. A reward is a pretty weak plot, but I am sure that you will dish something out that blow me away. As always.Gooch

awesome writing. i like how the author describes the characters emotions. i would like to know what exactly "the game" is. -skrewy

o, this is really good! Not what i was expecting. Great job! =) I think I shall go read something else by you now... hehe.