Very interesting story you've got going along here. Keep up the good writing. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

Hm... I like how you started this, though Okimi seems a bit stereotypical. I'm sure you'll develop her character more in later chapters though. These first few pages really remind me of the first Inuyasha episode where Kagome finds Inuyasha pinned to the tree. Is this where you got your inspiration?

I really like this so far. I like trying to figure out what's going on in some of the conflicts and wondering what's going to happen next; you've done a good job keeping my attention! And Aures is so sweet...even though he's a demon...Anyway keep up the good work, hope to see more of it soon.

I like this story; the characters seem to be very interesting. Anyways I was wondering if you would like to join group that I'm trying to start for writers on this site. Not a formal group or anything, just a bunch or writers e-mailing each other. Everyone who joined could read and review each other's stories (it can be a little hard for some people to get reviews on this site). It would also be a great way for writers to share writing tips or to offer help to anyone in the group who may need it. Right now I only have 2 people who are interested in the idea, but I believe there will be more people soon. I just came up with this idea a few weeks ago, so it'll take some time for the group to develop. Though I haven't posted a story yet, I should be posting it very soon. It'll be my first time posting one online, so I'm a little nervous. Whether I do good or not, as long as I have a good time then I'm okay. If you want to join the group, then e-mail me at storybored04@hotmail.com. Please tell any writers you may know about my idea. Happy writing, from the fox to you.