ok, let me tell you, my eyes were watering about the time ms. black dress was. wah!
not fairr!
...
wah!
I wish that ms. black dress had gotten her way in the end, and i wish mr. cute tuxedo boy was more romantic, and less sensible, and.. and...i want ms. black dress to be happy!!
Not fair, not fair.
Away from my personal feelings and to the analysis...
1) Great word choice, per usual. LOVE the last paragraph. How do you -always- write things Mr. Kamin would want to analyze? I think you should be renamed "Spoon 'Short Story' von Stup." That would fit you better.
So awesome.
Nice plot. After camp + pics, I GET it! And yet...wah!
*ahem*
Awesome, Spoon, awesome. *nodnod*

Aww, sad. This is really good, though.
At the part with the girl in the green dress, it gets slightly confusing about who's talking and giving who the rose, but I could figure it out. Maybe instead of saying "she" when green dress gives boy the flower, say "the girl in the green dress".
Also, another confusion over clothes. When you first start describing the three girls, you only say the girl wearing the pink dress. Then you talk about the girl in the black dress, and blue dress. This makes it a harder to figure out who you're talking about. How about, when you're describing pink dress, describe black dress and blue dress at the same time.
In the beginning when you're describing the room, I think you may have a little too much description. It makes it really nice picturing the room, but I got tired of hearing the words "black" and "white". ^_^ Since the roses are the important part, how about describing the layout of the room, and saying everything was black and white. Then describe the position of, and the roses, in detail.
Last, and probably least, your third comma in the entire story, I don't think is neccesary.
Don't you like how I went from bottom to top? ^_^ Anyways, I really enjoyed the story. Not giving any names, you still brought everything to the readers mind perfectly. I think not using names actually helped in that. It made you describe scenes and feelings in greater depth so that your reader knew what was happening. I just recently took a writing course at JHU-CTY, and we learned how to "show-don't-tell". You did that throughout the entire story wonderfully. ^_^

I can't beleive you have no reviews for this yet - it's awesome! I love how it's written from a neutral perspective, yet it conveys the feeling so well. Great job!