This is a really strong piece. Well done. Imagery is great. Your writing rules! QueenVixta

I love this. "Spiritual challenge" poems are my favorite, and the plants and vines are a great metaphor.

Very Very Good... I likedit. I can relate alot to it and i think that you are a vreay fine writer.

go you! go you! *cheers and repeats what darkpaladin13 said bc hes right*

You're just a mah-valous writer dah-ling. You just seem to churn out the deep, thoughtful, meaningful poems as if they were nothing. Bravada.