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| Raomina 2005-11-20 ch 9,  | abuseHey, this is a good story here! Are you gonna update? The characters are developed very well and the basis of the story is almost complete. The poems were wonderful (did you write them yourself?) and the emotions were very realistic. Is this going to be a romance story, or just about her angst? Coz if it is going to be romance, I suggest that you should include it in the genres. It would attract more popularity, and this is a very good story. Her name fits her very well and all the characters seem very original and unique. You really have to update this story. |
| Cierra 2005-07-08 ch 9, anon. | abusethanks-for-updating-heh-i-haven't-checked-it-out-in-awhile-but-please-update-soon-(p.s.-my-space-bar-is-messed-up-lol) |
| Lola Sanchez 2005-02-14 ch 9, | abuseagh im wondering whats gonna happen now! i feel bad for her. she obviously is too scared to accept the help; but she has good friends who obviously care for her deeply. (it's shaz by the way) cliffhangars are good; it leves us all demanding more! yes, it did lead to mroe shocking surprises...i cannot wait for this dramatic conclusion! whoo hoo |
| Cierra 2005-02-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseargh. not another cliffhanger! LOL. I love the new chapter. Please update faster this time! |
| shaz 2005-01-31 ch 8, anon. | abuseoh my god...a powerful chapter...you seriously shocked us there. how bout an update? |
| FrigidEnergy 2004-09-11 ch 2, | abuse"he looked up at me and gave me the amused smile that a counselor would give their patient when they wanted them to think that they sympathized with their problems." i love it. |
| Melanie 2004-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusei think the storys great. i cant wait to read the rest. and adam freaks me out, lol :'P |
| Dark Evening 2004-07-20 ch 5, | abuseI like it, but I had one small suggestion, I hope I don't offend you or something, it's just something I noticed. Ok, since the story is told in that persons pov you don't need to put the 'for when they are thinking to themselves.' It's just not nessicary, unless you were to put this story in omniecent pov. That's all, and I hope you continue. Later. |
| Cierra 2004-07-20 ch 5, anon. | abusehey this story rocks. seriously, keep going. |