Woah, I really like this one. The way you started the poem ' So tell me how do you feel ' was really great !
KIX
Ayda

(The Cure own Joy Division)
A hard poem to get to grips with, yeah well we both hate simple pieces anyway. It has the smell of the apocolypse about it, a bit existential but I can deal with it because you put some nihilist over tones in it.
"Are marching to the gallows"
Repitition is a hallmark of some of your best poems, it rubs the inescapable doom of things into your face. Good poem man and I'd love to do some combined work with you sometime.