 Sylvara 2006-06-23 . chapter 1 Very nice and sad.I like it. |
 Aillil 2004-07-15 . chapter 1How tragic! I love your word choice and your imagery in this poem. Especially, "Laugh at the wrath of the storm/What is wind or rain to her?"--very nice. Being a lover of fearies myself (having read numerous books and even writing one myself about them) I enjoyed this portrayal of a grieving faerie, for too often have they all been percieved as eternally happy beings (Unless, of course, you're studying Celtic mythology...thats a different story) :)
Anyhoo, I loved it--very LOTR as you said!
-Aillil |
 Voronwe 2004-07-15 . chapter 1Very nice. It reminded me a lot of Tolkien's work.
-The V Man |
 Narina 2004-07-13 . chapter 1Yah it remineds me of Arwen in LOTR, but its really good! Nice job! :) |
 Ishtar Johnston 2004-07-11 . chapter 1Such a delightful submission! Tickled my eyes as I read each line, simply enchanting! |
 Teperehmi 2004-07-09 . chapter 1Beautiful! |
 UnShure Dreamer 2004-07-08 . chapter 1This is a great poem! Really well written, I like it! |
 revengedemon 2004-07-07 . chapter 1"Take the moon to your heart every night, Laugh at the wrath of the storm" - Amen to that!
This poem was really amazing, the rhyme perfect, and the last last line... wow... I'm adding this to my favorites list. |
 only a mere mortal 2004-07-03 . chapter 1aw, i love it, it's great |