|Reviews for Why Don't You Smile?|
| Emz and Jemz 1/13/09 . chapter 1
It reminds me of lyrics that pertain to ska music.
Interesting words chosen for events, stuff like that. :
| Ria Mala 10/30/04 . chapter 1
I like how you describe everything...I can picture it.
| grim-dreamer 7/29/04 . chapter 1
Strong poem. Reads a bit like an advertisement or a billboard in some places, which just adds to the imagery of a selfish life in the fast lane.
| catseyeview 7/7/04 . chapter 1
I like the edge to your writing!