Reviews for Paper Planes and Paper Hearts

ProudToBeALoser 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abusethat was beautiful!
Lys 2005-03-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseDammit, stop making me think T.T That's really truly amazing. You are THE Jenn. Love Lys
Lyon Hart 2004-07-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really cool song. I really like the title a lot, and it goes very well along with the words. "I Wonder where those planes and pieces went; It seems so ago I've lost them". Awesome line. Good job...
StarEyedSunnySky 2004-07-03 ch 1,	abuseHi. I just joined fictionpress, but I've been writing for awhile now. I really like your poem, especially since in ways I can relate. It's best when you can read the words on the page and be able to feel what the author was feeling at that time. Keep writing from deep within your soul where those emotions are because then your writing becomes wonderful. As a suggestion, maybe the next time you write, even though I really haven't read your other works so I don't know all of your writing styles, but try taking those words and try turning it into a format with maybe a certain writing pattern. Other than that I'll make sure to read more of your stuff sometime. Maybe you can help review me sometime. I write poetry and I'm trying to write this novel, of course with no free time it's kind of hard.