Wow. This is really funny, but towards the end it read more like a Quentin Tarantino movie than a story. Still good, though. I liked Robbie's monologue about his background particularly. "I killed my first stoolie at the age of nine and a half". Genius. Pure genius.--Whizzo

This is awesome, if not a little confusing.
I have a story that I've just realized is slightly similar to this. How dare you mimick my insanity!
Anyways, this is hillarious. Continue. Please.

Huh. Rather odd, but so is most of this stuff, which of course makes it great.

the last dear/deer problem:
"looking for any sign of civilization other than the numerous dear crossing signs"
gotta love it :-)
I gotta say, the line in the 3rd chapter (i think) about "the man standing between me and the reaper sighed" made me think about all your Death story's (Death is, in my opinion, one of your best characters).
It would be very interesting to see what Death would say if he were to walk into the hotel room 13B.
:-)
Keep it up!

that was really good, very funny.

::stares at dazed stars around head:: Okay... THATs a lot of jumping... But kinda funny, if you think about it... That musta been one helluva resignation letter to have, from what I gather, started this whole thing...

lol, please include the resignation letter!

That was good. Glad you explained what happened. My review for Chpater one wasn't signed, but it was me. Please R&R my stuff (only have two, but oh well). Please write more, your stuff is really good, really funny.

M... baby vomit.
Actually the deer/dear error isn't completely fixed *grins*... don't hurt me.

"Sir that's a six inch katana blade" hahahahahahahaha
You're rather fond of the airport setting aren't ya?

funny and grand and beautiful and ultimately depressing. Continue please.

hehe, dude you are wierd. but in a brilliant, truely admirable way.

lol... only you...

Uhm... I got a tad bit lost on that one... The seperate parts I followed fine, adn had no problems undertsanding. The part at the airport was hilarious! But I can't even imagine how they fit together...

". . . and returned to my channel guide."
Fantastic ending.
Enough said.